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It's not all that bad by ~Anna-Kaley:iconAnna-Kaley:



"Dance with me"

"Why? There's no music"

"There's no time like now, the sun is fading and the streets are emptied"

"They're lonely"

"Not if we fill them again"

"With what?"

"Love"

"There's no love in this world"

"If there isn't, I wouldn't be happy and my presence here would be utterly useless"

"Happiness doesn't exist, everything is useless"

"It does exist if we make it"

"How?"

"By laughing"

"I dare not break the silence in this empty street"

"Why not?"

"It's frightening, chasing it away is foolish. It would come back again soon enough"

"It isn't frightening, it's merely dull"

"Like the world is dull, passive and numb"

"Not all is black"

"I don't see any colours"

"Open your eyes then"

"They are open!"

"Then start looking, look at the shades of purple in the skies, the remains of the sun and your reflection in those windows. Look at their beauty"

"I see what I always see. Misery, cold, distrust and indifference, the world is covered in a dark shade of grey. I seem to be blind from the colours you find so magnificent"

"Then create some light yourself"

"How?"

"Sing! Smile! Search and you'll find that there's some beauty left, still"

"How can I when I don't feel the way you do"

"Do something that makes you happy"

"What do you suggest then?"

"Dance"

"There's no music"

"Then we'll dance to our own little song, without rhythm or words. But it'll be ours and beautiful"

And she took his hand and danced with him under the fading sun, when the streets were emptied.
©2009 ~Anna-Kaley
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Author's Comments

This was for the Creative Writing group thingy. There are some lines I like, but they are few, but I thought I'd share it with you anyway ^^
Although I seem to be rambling on and on about the same things all the time in all my writings, sorry about that my faithful readers ^^

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I love it!


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P.S. Random "Hi" from a Random Deviant!
P.S.S. First Comment Woo!

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Dude It's LEX!!!!
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Wow.


I Really Like This, It Made Me Smile When I Felt So Down All Today, Thank You.

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:iconanna-kaley:
Thank you ^^
And a random Hi back! :D

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Wander in my dreams & I'll find you there
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:iconanna-kaley:
O thank you so much, the fact that it made you feel better is such a compliment to my work.
Thank you!

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Wander in my dreams & I'll find you there
[link] -> Best writers group out there!
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(: You're Welcome. You Deserve All The Compliments And Praise You Get.
:iconcahotic:
A really great piece, I love the way you structured it and how you captured your idea in such a creative way....

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If your Irish, come down to the parlor! *Sings*
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Thank you so much, I had serious doubts about this one but I though I'd submit it anyway, I'm glad you like it :D

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Wander in my dreams & I'll find you there
[link] -> Best writers group out there!
:iconcheshireyume:
I really like it!
It reminds me of an experience I had that was much like this one... ^^
I love how its structured in all dialouge, that's a great idea.
very lovely ^^

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War is sorrowful. THe flames of war burn away life and dreams and bonds, leaving behind countless sorrows. And sorrow gives birth to tragedy.
And tragedy gives birth to akuma.

-Bookman, D.gray man
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Thank you :D!

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Wander in my dreams & I'll find you there
[link] -> Best writers group out there!

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